orens, 1. December 2005, 21:55
Shy Nobleman - Baby in the Rain


Link: http://www.rockingoren.com/play/playnobleman.html

By Oren Shai and Adam Lewensohn. From Shy's new album
         
Oren, that's a clever concept, and slickly done. My one complaint is that there wasn't quite enough variety to hold my attention the whole way through. At a certain point, I felt like I got the concept, and I was ready for a new twist on it, or some new variation, but it didn't really happen until the very end, when everybody walked off the page. There was kind of a dry spell in the middle, I guess is what I'm saying.

But, like I said, it was slickly done, and I hope you'll post your future stuff here, too.