Bright Eyes - No One Would Riot For Less (dir. Lorenzo Fonda)
"an animated storybook approach to tell the grisly story of a feudal society on the brink of war."
(previous article)
I'm sorry but this is a bit odd:
i would rather watch a one take of the singer singing than this.
I think there is a lack of expression in the storyboards. It is clear what happens but a story board is a preparation step, in this case for the animators.
One of my animation teachers told me 3 things that should apear in a single drawing.
clear shiluette sincerity strong poses
You have a certain style for shure, but the poses seem a little bit weak. You should choose the extremes of a situation, at least when you consider to work with animation.
You shouldn´t show a picture every 2 or whatever seconds, that´s not important. What´s important is to capture changing points and extremes and state them very clear. If you don´t, all ryhthm and intensity will be washed out, the animation becomes muddy.
I agree that Conners voice tend to be depressed, but depression in a video shouldn´t be expressed as a lack of energy.
