My First Demo. What do you think?
Please keep in mind I have 1 1/2 years of exp and that I did everything without any $ or help. Please let me know what you think? I also produced the music for this video.
www.divinelightproductions.org
This is a quicktime file
What the heck am I watching here? Is this supposed to be a music video or an art piece? Gives me a headache either way.
If it was your reel it felt really long...you should really cut out anything that feels weak which I felt was half of it and the other half was some good imagery. The performance stuff from the bands looked a bit boring. I would say just cut it down to the absolute best stuff.
I loved it!!! It's very ADHD and that I can appreciate!!
Dave, there are some really striking images here, but it all flies by so fast that it doesn't feel especially coherent. I think you'd be better off showing a 30-60 second clip from one video, than a 30-60 second clip from another video, etc, instead of showing a half-second clip and then another half-second clip and then another... You clearly have an eye for striking images and an ability to get good cinematography on a low budget--but you aren't doing your talents justice by zipping past things so quickly.