Yeah I saw this the first time you posted it. I have a hard time critiquing it because I don't know what the budget was. If the budget was $0 then this would pretty good. If you actually had some money then the still frame collages feel kind of lazy. It comes off like a google image slide show. Also the call girl ad footage gets used too much towards the end. Anyways, if you want to get comments on your video you should post a better quality file than youtube. And post one of the frames with boobs as your screencap.

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