This is a shameless plug of my first video as a director. Crucify me if you must. http://www.soupkitchenfilms.net/apple.html Direct links http://www.soupkitchenfilms.net/movies/Apple_High.mov http://www.soupkitchenfilms.net/movies/Apple_Low.mov
         

www.soupkitchenfilms.net didn't work. 404.

         

seems competently shot & edited - tho fairly run o' the mill. found it slightly interesting as a study of uglies. (oh, and: tell me curlyboy jumps at the end...?)

         

indeed, the nuts and bolts are there. the art direction is good.
perhaps you could have put the scene to much better use. perhaps a wee, wee bit too much performance. Maybe not so wee.

keep shooting, just pick narrative over showing the band and with that obvious eye for simple art direction and shooting. you'll do better.

         

Crazy web hosts mangled the file! The high res version is now available. Thanks for the comments toddy, yeah it would have been nice to do more but we only had enough budget for fairy lights for one corner of the studio. Or did you just mean the narrative?

         

i agree with progosk and toddy as well. Looks decent. Edited well. I'm not into some of those slo-mos, but who am I right? I'm trying to make it as a video director as well and all I can say is take what you've learned from this to the next project.

         

EMO cheese music. yikes.