My Second Video, an improvement over my first. A Huge Improvement.

Comment please

Edit is tight.

yo true fiction,

heres my 2 cents on your piece. the video suffers from generic setups. The performance setting for the main section of the video is not interesting, and your talent doesnt bring a whole lot to the video to elevate it. i can appreciate that you tried to add a little something to the performance by putting one of your guys in the clouds, but the cloud background was not cool. The video really takes off in the last half when the music changes and it goes to black and white. the whole energy of this part is great.

thanks for the critiquing. I would like more, i want to develop as a director.