Something that i cooked up. My third video, be nice lol. Give me constructive criticsm

constructive criticism, okaydokey, here we go:

1. the tv fuzz & distortion element is nicely done - shows that you can do the same as hype on none of the budget (check Kanye's new one). but maybe get someone who knows how to light shots properly? either that or make it look totally home-made... as it is it's half way in between, and looks wack.
2. girls shaking ass, dry-humping the floor - personaly, i reckon this is soooooo old and pretty stupid. if you've got to have gratutitous girls dancing in the video, try and figure out a better way to do it. or better yet don't bother - if you can't afford seriously hot girls, it's going to look stupid.
3. fake tv banners - nicely done, but been done pretty much to death already; especially in low-budget hip-hop/grime (lady sovereign's 'random' menta remix, jehst 'nuke proof suit', every other eminem video, a fiddy cent one recently... yawn)

other than that, good effort. it's out there right? they got a video from it for (am assuming) zero budget? job done.

Thanks for the words. I wasnt even suppose to do that song when i shot the video. The song was a girl song, thus the women. I would agree about the girls because no one screened the girls b4 the shoot, and i had to choose the best ones, which still looks sad. Either way, i'm moving on.

Any other words from anyone