I wanted to like this so bad.

Two things:

a) why not make more of that surreal perspective interchange (the whole synaptic short-circuit thing)? Up 'til then I was wondering what the point of the eyelid gimmick was. The vid ends up being neither straightforward double narrative nor Gondryesque metaphysical mindbender;

b) small but killer, the continuity's wrong with the Cartier bag, which ends up the opposite side of the coffee cup to the PoV both times.