This slow and organic video was filmed in Sweden. And made for the Junior Boys video contest. Tell me what you think. /kliin juniorboys.imeem.com

If you're way into the music, maybe you can make the "organic" work for you. But, the "slow" just doesn't showcase anything.

a bit tooo slow. tell me a story, please.

The thing is that it was made as a backprojection. One of the "price" in the contest was that the video that winns would be shown on the JB tour as a backprojection. Thats why it so slow. But i understand that it's not made for MTV...and I didn't want to do one either.

I liked the more grafic approach to the theme which you choose for the layout - playing around in a split, positiv-negativ, etc could already be some way to make it more interesting...

Go as abstract as you want - I don't need a story, per se. I echo the no-MTV thing... I can definitely see this as a cool projection, but it doesn't hold the attention as a stand-alone video.

It's my first. If I had time I would love to do more projects like this. Thanks for your comments guys. It's appreciated.

good start-never stop